From Paul Carroll, 104 London Debaters
This week a short comedy "Speechless" by Andrew Viner was on BBC Radio 4. I recommend that listen again at: http://www.bbc.co.uk/programmes/b05xdgrf
In the play a pathologically shy young everyman, Guy, discovers the power of public speaking and makes a positive impact at work and in his community before flirting with demagoguery. The tale follows the classic cycle of Exposition, Rising action, Climax, Falling action & Denouement
As a boy Guy was subject to every modern and fashionable diagnosis before they settled on "shy". At school he was so fearful of speaking that it depreciated his strongest talents. For example, he failed to read aloud his prize-winning essay. His loving (but somewhat superstitious) mother even took him on a trip to Blarney Castle to kiss the stone. Post-school, she wangles him a job at the local Council complaints department. So unwilling to communicate with people is Guy that he devises ingenious technical ways of dodging phone calls and emails. Which puts him in a quandary. The number of complaints coming in has plummeted to the extent that Guy must address his department on Cutting Complaints. Hilarity ensues as he is unable--after many starts and much patience by his boss--even to begin his report.
In dramatic terms, his "moment of awareness" comes and he faces his "adversary" at his mother's funeral. The vicar makes such a hash of recounting her life that Guy is moved first to mutter, then to heckle, then to take over and deliver a warm, touching remembrance of the only person who had been close to him.
From a TM perspective, Guy addresses several dilemmas which I've known among unwilling public-speakers: he thinks he'll never make friends and never be promoted.
The author has created a vehicle with which to deliver lessons all public speakers need to learn. From Cicero's three rules (teach, delight and move your audience: docere, delectare, et movere) to Hitler's use of triads ("Ein Volk! Ein Reich! Ein Furher!"), Guy learns to use and then to abuse public speaking. His molten eloquence on mundane council business like roundabouts and cycle lanes gives way to extreme harangues at Speakers' Corner. His girlfriend, with whom he got together when he overcame his shyness to speak, becomes appalled and disillusioned with him. (Spoiler Alert: don't worry, they reconcile).
This is a humorous piece, to be sure, specially if you consider humour as "the truth, exaggerated". Some of Guy's shy behavior seems a bit over-the-top to be plausible. He makes a spreadsheet to see colleagues' break-times so he can go to the pantry alone for coffee. Yet I'll bet that in some office, somewhere, someone has done something like that. And I've mentored speakers who told me that their careers were stalled because they couldn't address a departmental meeting.
Experienced speakers will enjoy the humor in this play (some nostalgically) and novices will see illustrated how a reluctant speaker finds, loses and regains his voice.
You can listen to a one minute clip here: